saki101

Thank you for reading through this again. The way the last scene read kept nagging at me. I'm glad you feel the changes helped. (I just found another mistake a couple minutes ago and fixed that. Argh.)

I'm very pleased you felt the direction of Napoleon's thoughts on the double dates worked. Had been wondering whether that was too indirect. :)

I am definitely up for our January plan. I'm still travelling but will be back in situ on the weekend and hope to get going shortly after that. I'd be delighted to read everything you'd like to send as soon as you start though. May take us a couple days to re-immerse ourselves, but then we will forge on.