Date: 2011-10-23 09:06 pm (UTC)
Everyone else has said the hows and whys of their liking for this story, so I'll just say, "Yes, this is good. More please."

I think you're breaking in places that prevent it feeling too much like a WIP that causes resentment when the next part doesn't appear promptly.
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