So, so pleased you like it!! (You felt it seemed a reasonable development from the first section?) This was a strange one: it wouldn't wait its turn to be written and yet it didn't flow either and the rough draft moved from first person, to second, to a sort of close third. It's done now though and seems to be satisfied!
Are you working on something else for this fest?
*mumble, mumble* "Ye-es." (Inspects floor, scuffs shoe and is distracted by fascinating events outside the window.)
It is perhap half-written and more thought about, but the one above jumped the queue. Fortunately, I've been assigned Week 3 for posting. Nothing like writing up to the deadline or anything!
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Are you working on something else for this fest?
*mumble, mumble* "Ye-es." (Inspects floor, scuffs shoe and is distracted by fascinating events outside the window.)
It is perhap half-written and more thought about, but the one above jumped the queue. Fortunately, I've been assigned Week 3 for posting. Nothing like writing up to the deadline or anything!