Thank you for reading it over again and making suggestions! I've fixed the typos. (You were right about those.) I have to think about the options you suggest when my brain clears a bit. I know what you mean about saving different versions to compare. Right now, I'm in holiday exchange deadline insanity and have no one to blame but myself! Of course, it's a mad time of year for everyone anyway.
I'm more than a little delighted that the plot held your attention enough that you hadn't noticed. :-D
The Holmestice story is up. I wonder if you will spot it? I'll post it here and on AO3 after the reveal. It seems to be working as a stand-alone for those who have commented, but it's meant to go after Locked Rooms - Part II. I think it works there, but putting something into the timeline this much later may be a bit too daring or jarring. I thought some more relationship development was needed there, but got swept away in the post-TRF reactions.
Thank you once more (and always) for continuing on with this series this far!
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I'm more than a little delighted that the plot held your attention enough that you hadn't noticed. :-D
The Holmestice story is up. I wonder if you will spot it? I'll post it here and on AO3 after the reveal. It seems to be working as a stand-alone for those who have commented, but it's meant to go after Locked Rooms - Part II. I think it works there, but putting something into the timeline this much later may be a bit too daring or jarring. I thought some more relationship development was needed there, but got swept away in the post-TRF reactions.
Thank you once more (and always) for continuing on with this series this far!